Comments on Rough Cut

Comments:

Music is copyright
Black and white is better than colour/all the time
Black and white is most striking
Energetic
Revenge
Action Thriller/ Gangster Triller
Black and White = stand out effective
He cheated the conman
One man in suit one in casual, is that meant to be?
Striking features, good camera shots like Harry's trainers
Mood is very fast paced - action thriller
Revenge will be the rest of the plot or bigger scam
subgenre - action/thriller
Shots are a bit too long e.g had to wait for another pair of feet to come in
Music suited, could be better not to have Prodigy

From the comments, we now know that the black and white scenes are effective. We also may have to change the music. The characters are very distinct. people seem to understand the genral plot of the sequence.

By Harry and George