Feedback.

In todays lesson we watched and reviewed each others footage.
We received mainly possitive feedback but also some negative points we need to work on.
The negative points where-
That some of the shots are too long-of the feet, audiance gets impatient having to wait for next shot.
That our song is copyrighted-therefore people have heard it before and it also might remind them of past conotations-destracting them from the footage.
Costumes- some people commented that Harrys clothing was too casual for the shoot, we knew this but had planned for him to be in casual more informal clothing so to make Phil (character two, in the suit) appear more authorititive.

In our opinion we knew most of these points. However the fact that our feet shots are too long was a suprise to hear as we thought we had cut them down to quick enough.
We were glad to head that it all made sence, we had some worries that people wouldnt understand that plot. That character one had conned character two.

It was beneficial to hear what other peoples opinions are of our project. We can work on what they felt was wrong with it and improve the mistakes.
Now we wil work on changing the music so that it is not a copywrited song.

Britt